Annotated model answer

ESL report or article: an annotated model response

A strong answer with margin notes that show what earns the marks. Every passage and answer here is our own.

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The exam-style question

This is an ESL report or article question, in the style of the English as a Second Language papers. Read it as you would in the exam, then compare your plan with the model.

Your class visited a science museum. Write a report for your school newsletter describing the visit and saying what students gained from it.

Organise it clearly for readers. This is our own practice prompt.

Our original passageapprox. 175 words

Notes: Science Museum Visit

Details for your report. Last month, Form 4 visited the National Science Centre. What happened: students arrived at 9 a.m. and were split into three groups.

Group activities: a hands-on electricity workshop where students built simple circuits; a planetarium show about the solar system; and a robotics demonstration in the afternoon. Highlights mentioned by students: many said the circuit workshop made a difficult topic 'finally make sense'; several enjoyed lying back to watch the planetarium ceiling; a few said the robot that recognised faces was the best part. A small number found the day tiring and the lunch queue too long.

Teachers said the trip linked well to what the class had been studying. What students gained: a clearer understanding of some physics topics, interest in careers they had not considered, and a fun day out together. The newsletter audience is students, parents and teachers, so the tone should be clear, positive and informative, and the report should be organised into sensible sections.

Our annotated model response

Model response: ESL report or article

A newsletter report is organised and informative but readable. It tells the audience what happened and, importantly, what was gained.

Last month, Form 4 spent the day at the National Science Centre, and it proved one of the most useful trips of the year.1 The morning was hands-on: in an electricity workshop, students built simple circuits, and many said the topic 'finally made sense' once they could see it working.2 A planetarium show and an afternoon robotics demonstration followed, with the face-recognising robot a clear favourite.3 Not everything was perfect (the lunch queue tested everyone's patience), but that honest note keeps the report trustworthy.4 Above all, students came away understanding difficult physics more clearly and, for some, curious about careers they had never considered: a day both fun and worthwhile.5

A trial lesson can compare your child's own answer with this model on ESL report or article.

Common errors we see

  • A casual diary tone instead of an organised report register
  • No clear sections or structure for the reader
  • Forgetting the task's focus (here, what students gained)
  • Listing events without selecting or shaping them
  • Not keeping the set audience (newsletter readers) in mind

How this maps to the mark scheme

Examiners mark against assessment objectives. These are the skills the paper rewards.

For ESL report or article, the objectives in play are listed below. The wording is summarised for Cambridge IGCSE English as a Second Language (0510) on our qualification page.

  • Communicate information, ideas and opinions clearly.
  • Organise ideas into coherent, well-linked text.
  • Use an appropriate range of grammatical structures and vocabulary accurately.
  • Use register and style suited to the purpose and audience.

Communicate the information clearly, organise it into logical paragraphs, use accurate grammar and match the register to the reader.

Other boards word their objectives differently, but the same skills earn the marks. Your board's official syllabus gives the exact weighting.

Where to go next

Learn the method in our guide to ESL report or article, then try the ESL report or article practice tasks. You can browse every annotated model response or see how we teach this in our English as a Second Language tuition.

When you have written your own answer, take it to a paid one-hour trial lesson and the teacher who would continue will mark it with you.

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